THRILLER COURSEWORK: POST STAGE 1
We've gathered a first rough cut of the film- still shots missing- but good enough at the moment. Ryu and I are pretty satisfied with the work made and hopefully we will try to shape an accurate vision through post-production.
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After the first rough cut we received compliments and criticisms from our classmates to help us improve. Here is a portion of what was said...
STRENGTHS
- Love the eye shot at beginning- great cinematography
- Good music for tension
- Parallel editing is effective here
- The use of mise en scene (tap/clock/door)
- Colour composition is nice
- Great use of different shots (canted angle/zoom reverse)
- Richy's acting is like a pro
- Love the use of glass water and the hands
LIMITATIONS
- A fast pace music for the chase scene may be?
- Need to balance volume of diegetic and non-diegetic sounds
- Camera movement is quite shaky in the door scene- a bit too long
- Put an actual clock on the "clock ticking scene"?
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